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heh, I remember blamming the first one. City of Heroes screen shots with text. Innovative. And not irritating.

Eh, the storyline is obsessive / borderline stalker. If someone breaks up with you through email, the relationship was never that serious anyway. The animation was pretty decent however.

I gave you a 0 because the sound made the rest of the movie unwatchable.

Jamicus responds:

i don't like you.

It was kinda short. The sound was excellent, and the animation was very good. Not much as far as backstory, though.

3/5, raising score to 2.33

You know this already, but you'll make it through the portal.

Famicom-Kid responds:

I know, cause I am awesome...

I gave it a 3. It was short, but I was still impressed. Interesting, too.

My only real problem with it is that it was a promo. Sure, you're going to increase your fanbase, and I myself will end up there... But did you have to toy with us so badly? Seriously... Watching that is like being blueballed!

Good work, though.
5/5

Renshu responds:

I know. I'm an asshole. It was originally going to be longer... I'm a real impatient jerk. Since everyone here wants me to turn this into a flash series, I might just do it... So then, no more blueballs!

All I've got to say after watching that, Volume 2 had better not take another 4 months to make!

Over half-way through, your use of the abbreviation "w/e" seemed very out of place. It's not IM, it's not BBS. It's flash, and from what I recall, all the text up to that point was spelled out.

After the main character goes through "the door," the sonic character (I believe) makes a comment followed by !!!!!!!!!!11. I know I sometimes do that just to make fun of all the people who are so "enthusiastic" when they type that they do it by accident... I can't tell if that's what you're doing.

Once the main character is inside the "hidden door," the dark gray text from the blobish "I'll empower you" thing is _REALLY_ hard to read, because of its placement over the background.

I think that's pretty much it; other than that, it was really good.

4/5

Kirbopher responds:

Well I specifically made the text that ciolor because it represented that Alpha couldn't hear what the voice wwas saying, and did you notice that the text got clearer with each sentence? Also yes, I made some of the characters talk like that on purpose because that's how a lot of people talk on the internet. The main characters talk normally though, more or less.

Isn't there something like a 5 meg movie size limit? Then why not make it longer? That was good stuff.

Ya know, of all the "you need to die because America is the best" reviews, I find it funny that few, if any, had correct grammar and spelling. I find it great that the United States--which is my country--is the greatest country in the world, and it makes me proud that so few of my fellow countrymen know how to use the English language.

Now for your movie:

I do believe the US is capable of a similar action. We ARE the most advanced nation in the world, so we ARE the most likely to pull such a stunt. Terrorize the public enough and there will be an outcry for a solution--no matter how much freedom is given up, or how devastating the result. We like a quick fix with no thought put toward the side effects and aftermath.

I liked your cartoon not only on an intellectual basis, but also from the music, animation and sounds--even if a few of the sounds were easily recognizable. I'm glad it's on the front page, cos I would likely never have seen it otherwise.

(If I'd seen it in the portal, I'd have given it a 5)

Flyborg responds:

Thanks for that, very insightful. I'm also glad and very surprised that it's on the front page - I thought I'd have to work my way up to that - like get 5th place one time, 2nd place later, and eventually, if I'm lucky, get on the front page. :D

If you like my music, then visit my webpage. Since the NG description box is waay too small for music, I decided I'd put up a more in-depth description for each song. Best viewed at 1024x768; uses CSS and frames

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